Horror story

Once upon a time there was a scary horror doll she just sat well the kids found a secret basement the kids and decided to go in they,heard help me ,help me the kids put their ear up closer and then a crackled voice said don't you ever help her.They did not know what to do so they went to there weird parents and told them and they tried to run away but it was too late to do anything.The kids went to bed the mum and dad said good night little creatures and they shut the door.After a hour they fell to sleep the lights flickered the room walls cracked and the kids woke up a big black shadow walked towards them they were to scared to move there hearts stopped and the dark shadow walked away and shattered like dust so they ran away never to be found.20 years later there mum and dad had passed the police never knew how they passed away Liam and his sister Bethany bought the house and Liam said I remember this house very clearly.They went up in the room and put there ear up even closer help someone said they thought the spirits were gone they thought wrong they packed their stuff again and never to be found in the country.What happened to the house well they broke and bashed the haunted old house.

Walt: this is a fun way to do a horror exspernce from just words out of a book

what do you like about my story and what could I work on to make it way more better?

Life cycle

Bottle nose dolphins.

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Walt: I had so much fun making this because my favorite sea animal is dolphins they are amazing creatures and fun to play with if they're friendly.

Reflection: I enjoyed researching all these fun ideas about these unique dolphins.

The house was usual enough.

The house was usual enough, it had a delightful 100mtr lake, a brown tinted bridge, an 18aker block, a lovely basketball court and an amazing pool I never dove into. My best friend, my cousin and I did what kids do - hunted for different kind of bugs, jumped on the trampoline when we felt depressed, went for long swims that made you dirty, and captured little frogs when we felt bored,and fell asleep on a pontoon in the middle of the lake doing nothing important.

Walt: This was a kind of a poem thing but retold by Alicia and the real writter was jackson k baxter he did something diffrent but us students wrote ours something based on what we wanted to write.